Aquà tienes una traducción natural y clara al inglés, con un tono adecuado para una queja o reseña:
The room was dirty; it hadnât been vacuumed, and there were dirty socks next to the fridge. There were no towels. Thankfully, we were moved to another room. However, it was still very poorly maintained: the toilet hadnât been cleaned, the carpet was dirty, and the noise from the heating system kept us awake. At the pool, there were no towels available, and the water was very cold.
Aquà tienes la continuación en inglés, manteniendo el mismo tono de queja formal:
Additionally, during breakfast, maintenance was being done on the main entrance door. It was kept open, which made the breakfast area extremely cold.